I think that human factors is more important.Since environment factors only includes the geography factor,such as natural barries,convenient in other place only and the adequate natural resources etc.However,the human factors includes leadership,economics factor and military factors. A good leadership can carry out policies which benefit to the country and people.A good economy can provide stable and consistent currency system and good system of road network for trading and travelling.
With a good military have well trained army,good military strategy or disciplined. All the above are the important human factors for the rise of empire.
Dear Ching Wai, I am pleased to see you sharing your ideas. It is a good attempt. I am glad that you can point out some good features of the Roman civilization, especially democracy. It is a good attempt on your part to try to compare it with the political situation of China. Keep it up and try harder. Mr. Mui
I think human factor is more important than enviromental factors.Although you have many advantage in geografic factors, unless you know how to use it,it's meaningless. For example,Roman Empire was located on hilly enviroment,Roman people found the advantage of the hilly location and used it as a good protection from the enenies. Man can make good use of the enviromental factors and I think man may change disadvantage into advantage too. If an empire is geographically worse than the other empires,however the empire has a good leader who can make better use of these factors,the empire will become stronger. So I think the human factor is more important than the environmental factors.
Darren Tang 1C (26) I think human factor is more important than environment factor for the rise of the empires. Although geographical factor is a very important factor for the rise of the empires, but generally human can control everything, for example, people can make use of petrol, people can construct the buildings and people can invent technological inventions when they need to improve their life in the community. Also, human factor includes military power and leadership. For example, in the Neo-Babylon Empire, the king Nebuchadnezzar II led the army to conquer many countries and that was because of the king had good leadership, and the country would become a strong empire if they won the war. Also, Nebuchadnezzar II was capable to be the leader of army. Under his leadership, Neo-Babylon Empire allied with Medes Empire to form a strong army to fight against Assyrians. That is why I think human factor is more important than environment factor for the rise of the empires.
Hello, everyone, I am Theodor Yu Ho Tin from class 1C.
I think that environment factor is the most important factor because if the environment factor is not good, for example, if there is a long way to get water from town or if there are too much disaster like typhoon, earthquake and so on, it is not good for the empire to be a good and strong empire because if there are too much disaster, the city will be destroyed by the disaster. If there is a long way to get water from town, people may die because of lack to water.
I think human factors is more important than environment factor to be a strong empire.For example strong leadership,good relationship amongst peoples and perfect government structure, etc are highly related with human factor.
For example,Roman had a famous leader called Caeser.He led the Roman army and won the wars.He greatly expanded Roman territory and was much loved by the people.
Moreover,Rome set up a republic which was a strong government structure.It mainly consisted of different classes - citizens, nobles and senates.They worked together to make law and reform to lead Rome as a strong empire.
I think is the human factors is more important than the environment factor.It is because the human factors is about to the leadership,and the Leadership is very important.If you have a good environment,but did not have human factor ,it was not is a country.
Dear 1E07lo tsz kam, i do agree what you have written. But you said 'Leadership is very important'. what do you mean by important? Can you elabrate it more specific? And you said ' If you have a good enviornment, ....'' what do you mean by ' good environmnet ? can you define it ? if you can do that, your statement and elaboration will be more clear and persuasive.=]
I think human factor is more important than enviromental factors to become a strong empire. It is because people can invent things or construct the buildings so that they can improve our living standard. In addition, human factor also includes military power and leadership. If you have a good leader,the country will become stronger and better.
I think human factor is more important than enviromental factors, it is because what enviromental factors is the human can also live in this world, but if the country do not have enough human so your country will give another people to be thier place. Thank you.
I think human factor is more important than environment factor for the rise of the empires. Although geographical factor is a very important factor for the rise of the empires,because strong leadership,good relationship amongst peoples and perfect government structure, etc are highly related with human factor.
1e10Esther Shek I think human and environmental factors are important for the rise of empires. A country was unable to expand and became strong if there were no good quality citizens.So I think environmental also important because if there were a hill than human will easy to die.But if there were near the river they can get water easily and catch fish easily. So i think human and environmental are important.
What we need now is a new imperialism, a kind of cosmopolitanism with values of human rights and the compatibility of imperialism: the imperialism of order and organization system is committed to practice, but in today rely on the voluntary principle ...
In addition to Western economic and cultural power recovery reasons, and now added the use of force in international willingness to impose its will clear.
Finally, relations with Thailand in itself the most is that this time also and love Thai Party Thaksin (Thai Rak Thai) government at the rise. His enemies, the Thaksin is all of these "imperial" symbol of context: he adhere to neo-liberal economic orthodoxy, his alliance with the United States to combat terrorism (the way he dealt with riots in the south is regarded as Bush's invasion of Afghanistan and the inevitable result of Iraq), but more controversial is his claim under the political legitimacy of the ballot box. The principle behind angered leftists, but also make monarchist faction fear. Intellectuals and, later, the mass media that the "Thaksin regime" (rabop Thaksin)
Seems to be "Empire" the embodiment of global operations in Thailand, so Thaksin's political opponents often accused him of repeatedly "selling out" (ขายชาติ). Then, the "empire", as well as left-leaning post-colonial imperialism in the new millennium started, he fell on fertile ground in Thailand on the social sciences. In the empire of evil and to resist and protest is a good and politically correct orthodoxy, the followed from the anti-imperialist.
Some students are not able to post their writing as they encounter technical problem. Thus, they send their work to me. Their writings are as follow:
HO SHING CHUN (1B-19) I think environmental factor is the important factor,because the some country have environmental factor ,but they cannot rise their country. The city which has the leadership leader,can be the big empire.For example,Rome Empire,it have not the environmental factor ,but have a good leader.Then it become a big country.
CHAN HIN KONG (1B-13) I think the both factor are important .It is because if you don’t have a good leadership ,the empire may be will deatory by the other empire. If don't have a good environment the people will easy to die.
CHEUNG CHEUK KA (1B-15) I think it is because many people smoke,drive their car themselves... If people don't smoke too more or don't smoke,the earth will be better. People can also go to places by transport, because if people don't drive too much car ,smoke will be less,the earth will be much better,too. People can plant the trees ,it is because trees can use bad air change to good air, don't cut too many trees and trees can make fruits to give us to eat too.
CHONG LOK MAN (1B-05) I think human factor is more important than environment factor for the rise of the empires. Although geographical factor is a very important factor for the rise of the empires,because strong leadership,good relationship amongst peoples and perfect government structure, etc are highly related with human factor.
CHOI LOK HEI (1B-17) I think human factor is more important than enviromental factors.Although you have many advantage in geografic factors, unless you know how to use it,it's meaningless. For example,Roman Empire was located on hilly enviroment,Roman people found the advantage of the hilly location and used it as a good protection from the enenies.
LEUNG HISAHIKO IGOR (1B-24) I thing human and environmental factors are important, because the human factors is about to the leadership,and many peple think the environment factor is not good .But if we protect the environment it will a good think . >.<
LEUNG KIU CHING (1B-25) I think human is more important to rise the empires. Although there are good environment in the empire, it's nothings help for the rise of the empire if the people in the empire don't no how to use their good environment.
WONG MAN CHUNG (1B-33) I think the human factor is more important than the environmental factor. It is because the human factor is about leadership, military power and economic. They are very important. For example, the leader of Roman, he let the Roman army and won the wars.A good economy can provide stable and consistent currency system and good system of road network for trading and travelling.
FUNG LOK WAI (1B-07) I think the human factors is important than the environment factor. Because the human is very important ,if no human then how to have the environment.Human have storng leadership then I think the leadership is very big. So,I think the human factors is more important then the environment factor.
TANG SHING CHI (1B-32) The Human factor is more important for the country to become a strong country. It is because the good Human can help the country use easily idea to help the country to fight the country was not very strong ,but the country have a lot of thing to use ,like wood, weapons, food and the money etc . When the country fight to this country or cit. If you winner in the fight. The winner will become a strong country very easily .
CHEN TSZ CHING (1B-03) I think human is important than the environmental factors for the rise of empires. It is because if the empire have no human, their have not any economic, military etc.
For example, Greek empire was near the sea so they have a strong navy . If Greek do not have any human ,they will not have a strong navy.
LAM OI TING (1B-09) I think is the human factors is more important than the environment factor for rise of the empires, it is because in human factor have leadership. Although geographical factor is a very important factor for the rise of the empires, but people can use mind to solve the problem of geographical. People can construct the buildings , can invention think to improve our life. So, I think human factors is more important than the environment factor.
CHIU HO YAN MALKA (1B-04) Environmental factor are important but human are more important.However, I think human are more important for the rise of empire. For example, China become rich and strong because there are lots of people to make money.
FUNG LOK WAI (1B-07) I think the human factors is important than the environment factor. Because the human is very important ,if no human then how to have the environment.Human have storng leadership then I think the leadership is very big. So,I think the human factors is more important then the environment factor.
TANG SHING CHI (1B-32) The Human factor is more important for the country to become a strong country. It is because the good Human can help the country use easily idea to help the country to fight the country was not very strong ,but the country have a lot of thing to use ,like wood, weapons, food and the money etc . When the country fight to this country or cit. If you winner in the fight. The winner will become a strong country very easily .
CHEN TSZ CHING (1B-03) I think human is important than the environmental factors for the rise of empires. It is because if the empire have no human, their have not any economic, military etc.
For example, Greek empire was near the sea so they have a strong navy . If Greek do not have any human ,they will not have a strong navy.
LAM OI TING (1B-09) I think is the human factors is more important than the environment factor for rise of the empires, it is because in human factor have leadership. Although geographical factor is a very important factor for the rise of the empires, but people can use mind to solve the problem of geographical. People can construct the buildings , can invention think to improve our life. So, I think human factors is more important than the environment factor.
CHIU HO YAN MALKA (1B-04) Environmental factor are important but human are more important.However, I think human are more important for the rise of empire. For example, China become rich and strong because there are lots of people to make money.
CHAN HOI CHING (1B-02) I think human factor is more important than environment factor .It is because if the people are storng ,the cloud win the wars easily.
LEUNG CHEUK LAM SUBRINA (1B-10) Of cause, the human factors and the environment factors are both important because there are lots of things to do to be a strong empire.But,I think environment factors is more important than the human facetorsto be a strong empire.Human factors includs natural barries...... People need water and food. If a empire local somewhere which is always flooding.The flooding mades lots of people die and need lots of time to rerise.And will lose lots of food. When the empire is need river or sea.People can get water easily.he place usually good for farming because it is near the sea.If there enough food then can support to fight for a long time. So ,i think environment factors is more important than the human factors.
WONG WING HIN (1B-36) I think human factor is more important than enviromental factors because if a strong empire didn't have a smart leadership to leader your empire it will be very troublesome. For example, if you don't have a smart leader to lead your arms, your arms will don't know how to fight with other empire....... So i thing human factor is more important than enviromental factors.
I think human factor is more important than enviromental factor because if the leader do not kown way to fight other empire, they will be lose the war, and if the empire haven't leader, it will be can not control the money about economy.
I think enviromental factor is more important than the human factor because when we have good enviromental then we will have good economies and good geography. Economics have good system of network or surrounding enviroment. Adequate labor sourses for construction works and production . And the geography is about the natural barriers to protecet the civilization, convenient of travelling. And it also haveAdequate the natural resoures. They also have the fertile soil so they can grow crops easily. If they have the good travel they can trade some things to another countries or city. So I think that enviromental factor is more important than the human factor.
I think human factor is the rise of empires, it is because you did not have a leader you cannot battle with the other countries because no one lead the people than they will become, if you have internal conflict you will lose on the battle than you did not have place and money, but contrary the place and money will reduce and reduce, if you did not have a good leader it can’t use the good stratagem to battle with the other countries then it will lose the battle, it that is the bad leader it can’t get the hart of the citizenry, so I think the human factor is the rise of empires.
I think human of the factor is more important , because if we do not have many human in the empires , we have not farming, fishing and fighting with other empires.If we do not have leader we can also die in the empires.It is because the other empire will fight with the empires.
In my opinion, human factors is more important than the environmental factos to the rise of civilization. For example, Roman Empire had a good leadership, Julius Caesar. He was probably the best Roman General in the history of Ancient Rome. When he was in the office, he carried out reforms, relieved debt, enlarged the senate and revised the calendar. With the best army, he fought the barbarians in the North. Finally, he could expand the territories of Roman.
That's why, i think the Human factors are very important. If there was no Julius Caesar, the Roman Empire no longer existed.
I think human of the factor ,in Human is more important for the rise of empires and Deadline ,if have the bad leades it will Deadline ,and if have good leades it will rise.
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I think is Human of the factor.I t is because we want to have a good leader to manage the empire.The leader want to manage military 、economical、politics.If no leader to manage the empire.The empire will become extinct.
I thin is the important factor is the human factor. The human factor can rise the Environmental factor. So I think the human factor is the umportant factor.
I think the environmental factor and the human factor are both important of the rise of empires, because if the humans do not have a good environment, then the empire will not be much stronger. Maybe some forest will use to make some paper by the human. But human factor is also good! The human will make buildings, or to be a solider. In this compare, that’s show us both factors are the important for the rise of empires.
Firstly, I would like to clear of my view of manpower and environmental factor. For environmental factor, it’s like the base factor of all factors. Because of a good environmental factor, people there can have good result from framing and this encourage the economy increase and when the economy increase, and then they can make more weapons and lastly this can increase the military power. These can let an empire rise, and most of the people would think that these benefits are from the environmental power. However, if there is no manpower, what above are only dreams! Let me take an example for clear of these ideas. Moreover, I would like to pack up Persia as an example. Persia is a place that most around sea, although this, they started to develop fishery. Also, this encourage their economy increase and they started to develop navy, because of their long-drawn-out reach with the sea, their navy has lots of rich experience, these help them won in many wars. However, if these are with out manpower, they won’t win. Lastly, what I would like to say is that manpower is important as environmental factor, and they like two rings locked together, if missing any one of them, the empire will come to the fall.
1B (32) Tang Shing Chi The Human factor is more important for the country to become a strong country. It is because the good Human can help the country use easily idea to help the country to fight the country was not very strong ,but the country have a lot of thing to use ,like wood, weapons, food and the money etc . When the country fight to this country or cit. If you winner in the fight. The winner will become a strong country very easily .
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ReplyDeleteI think that human factors is more important.Since environment factors only includes the geography factor,such as natural barries,convenient in other place only and the adequate natural resources etc.However,the human factors includes leadership,economics factor and military factors.
ReplyDeleteA good leadership can carry out policies which benefit to the country and people.A good economy can provide stable and consistent currency system and good system of road network for trading and travelling.
With a good military have well trained army,good military strategy or disciplined.
All the above are the important human factors for the rise of empire.
Dear Ching Wai, I am pleased to see you sharing your ideas. It is a good attempt. I am glad that you can point out some good features of the Roman civilization, especially democracy. It is a good attempt on your part to try to compare it with the political situation of China. Keep it up and try harder.
ReplyDeleteMr. Mui
I think human factor is more important than enviromental factors.Although you have many advantage in geografic factors, unless you know how to use it,it's meaningless.
ReplyDeleteFor example,Roman Empire was located on hilly enviroment,Roman people found the advantage of the hilly location and used it as a good protection from the enenies. Man can make good use of the enviromental factors and I think man may change disadvantage into advantage too.
If an empire is geographically worse than the other empires,however the empire has a good leader who can make better use of these factors,the empire will become stronger.
So I think the human factor is more important than the environmental factors.
Darren Tang 1C (26)
ReplyDeleteI think human factor is more important than environment factor for the rise of the empires. Although geographical factor is a very important factor for the rise of the empires, but generally human can control everything, for example, people can make use of petrol, people can construct the buildings and people can invent technological inventions when they need to improve their life in the community. Also, human factor includes military power and leadership. For example, in the Neo-Babylon Empire, the king Nebuchadnezzar II led the army to conquer many countries and that was because of the king had good leadership, and the country would become a strong empire if they won the war. Also, Nebuchadnezzar II was capable to be the leader of army. Under his leadership, Neo-Babylon Empire allied with Medes Empire to form a strong army to fight against Assyrians. That is why I think human factor is more important than environment factor for the rise of the empires.
Hello, everyone, I am Theodor Yu Ho Tin from class 1C.
ReplyDeleteI think that environment factor is the most important factor because if the environment factor is not good, for example, if there is a long way to get water from town or if there are too much disaster like typhoon, earthquake and so on, it is not good for the empire to be a good and strong empire because if there are too much disaster, the city will be destroyed by the disaster. If there is a long way to get water from town, people may die because of lack to water.
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ReplyDeleteI think human factors is more important than environment factor to be a strong empire.For example strong leadership,good relationship amongst peoples and perfect government structure, etc are highly related with human factor.
ReplyDeleteFor example,Roman had a famous leader called Caeser.He led the Roman army and won the wars.He greatly expanded Roman territory and was much loved by the people.
Moreover,Rome set up a republic which was a strong government structure.It mainly consisted of different classes - citizens, nobles and senates.They worked together to make law and reform to lead Rome as a strong empire.
This is only my comment for reference.
I think is the human factors is more important than the environment factor.It is because the human factors is about to the leadership,and the Leadership is very important.If you have a good environment,but did not have human factor ,it was not is a country.
ReplyDeleteDear 1E07lo tsz kam,
ReplyDeletei do agree what you have written. But you said 'Leadership is very important'. what do you mean by important? Can you elabrate it more specific? And you said ' If you have a good enviornment, ....'' what do you mean by ' good environmnet ? can you define it ?
if you can do that, your statement and elaboration will be more clear and persuasive.=]
I think human factor is more important than enviromental factors to become a strong empire. It is because people can invent things or construct the buildings so that they can improve our living standard. In addition, human factor also includes military power and leadership. If you have a good leader,the country will become stronger and better.
ReplyDeleteI think human factor is more important than enviromental factors, it is because what enviromental factors is the human can also live in this world, but if the country do not have enough human so your country will give another people to be thier place. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteI think human factor is more important than environment factor for the rise of the empires. Although geographical factor is a very important factor for the rise of the empires,because strong leadership,good relationship amongst peoples and perfect government structure, etc are highly related with human factor.
ReplyDelete1e10Esther Shek
ReplyDeleteI think human and environmental factors are important for the rise of empires. A country was unable to expand and became strong if there were no good quality citizens.So I think environmental also important because if there were a hill than human will easy to die.But if there were near the river they can get water easily and catch fish easily.
So i think human and environmental are important.
What we need now is a new imperialism, a kind of cosmopolitanism with values of human rights and the compatibility of imperialism: the imperialism of order and organization system is committed to practice, but in today rely on the voluntary principle ...
ReplyDeleteIn addition to Western economic and cultural power recovery reasons, and now added the use of force in international willingness to impose its will clear.
Finally, relations with Thailand in itself the most is that this time also and love Thai Party Thaksin (Thai Rak Thai) government at the rise. His enemies, the Thaksin is all of these "imperial" symbol of context: he adhere to neo-liberal economic orthodoxy, his alliance with the United States to combat terrorism (the way he dealt with riots in the south is regarded as Bush's invasion of Afghanistan and the inevitable result of Iraq), but more controversial is his claim under the political legitimacy of the ballot box. The principle behind angered leftists, but also make monarchist faction fear. Intellectuals and, later, the mass media that the "Thaksin regime" (rabop Thaksin)
Seems to be "Empire" the embodiment of global operations in Thailand, so Thaksin's political opponents often accused him of repeatedly "selling out" (ขายชาติ). Then, the "empire", as well as left-leaning post-colonial imperialism in the new millennium started, he fell on fertile ground in Thailand on the social sciences. In the empire of evil and to resist and protest is a good and politically correct orthodoxy, the followed from the anti-imperialist.
Some students are not able to post their writing as they encounter technical problem. Thus, they send their work to me. Their writings are as follow:
ReplyDeleteHO SHING CHUN (1B-19)
I think environmental factor is the important factor,because the some country have environmental factor ,but they cannot rise their country.
The city which has the leadership leader,can be the big empire.For example,Rome Empire,it have not the environmental factor ,but have a good leader.Then it become a big country.
CHAN HIN KONG (1B-13)
I think the both factor are important .It is because if you don’t have a good leadership ,the empire may be will deatory by the other empire. If don't have a good environment the people will easy to die.
CHEUNG CHEUK KA (1B-15)
I think it is because many people smoke,drive their car themselves...
If people don't smoke too more or don't smoke,the earth will be better.
People can also go to places by transport, because if people don't drive too much car ,smoke will be less,the earth will be much better,too.
People can plant the trees ,it is because trees can use bad air change to good air, don't cut too many trees and trees can make fruits to give us to eat too.
CHONG LOK MAN (1B-05)
I think human factor is more important than environment factor for the rise of the empires. Although geographical factor is a very important factor for the rise of the empires,because strong leadership,good relationship amongst peoples and perfect government structure, etc are highly related with human factor.
CHOI LOK HEI (1B-17)
I think human factor is more important than enviromental factors.Although you have many advantage in geografic factors, unless you know how to use it,it's meaningless.
For example,Roman Empire was located on hilly enviroment,Roman people found the advantage of the hilly location and used it as a good protection from the enenies.
LEUNG HISAHIKO IGOR (1B-24)
I thing human and environmental factors are important, because the human factors is about to the leadership,and many peple think the environment factor is not good .But if we protect the environment it will a good think . >.<
LEUNG KIU CHING (1B-25)
I think human is more important to rise the empires. Although there are good environment in the empire, it's nothings help for the rise of the empire if the people in the empire don't no how to use their good environment.
WONG MAN CHUNG (1B-33)
I think the human factor is more important than the environmental factor. It is because the human factor is about leadership, military power and economic. They are very important.
For example, the leader of Roman, he let the Roman army and won the wars.A good economy can provide stable and consistent currency system and good system of road network for trading and travelling.
FUNG LOK WAI (1B-07)
ReplyDeleteI think the human factors is important than the environment factor. Because the human is very important ,if no human then how to have the environment.Human have storng leadership then I think the leadership is very big.
So,I think the human factors is more important then the environment factor.
TANG SHING CHI (1B-32)
The Human factor is more important for the country to become a strong country. It is because the good Human can help the country use easily idea to help the country
to fight the country was not very strong ,but the country have a lot of thing to use ,like wood, weapons, food and the money etc . When the country fight to this country or cit.
If you winner in the fight. The winner will become a strong country very easily .
CHEN TSZ CHING (1B-03)
I think human is important than the environmental factors for the rise of empires. It is because if the empire have no human, their have not any economic, military etc.
For example, Greek empire was near the sea so they have a strong navy . If Greek do not have any human ,they will not have a strong navy.
LAM OI TING (1B-09)
I think is the human factors is more important than the environment factor for rise of the empires, it is because in human factor have leadership. Although geographical factor is a very important factor for the rise of the empires, but people can use mind to solve the problem of geographical. People can construct the buildings , can invention think to improve our life. So, I think human factors is more important than the environment factor.
CHIU HO YAN MALKA (1B-04)
Environmental factor are important but human are more important.However, I think human are more important for the rise of empire. For example, China become rich and strong because there are lots of people to make money.
FUNG LOK WAI (1B-07)
ReplyDeleteI think the human factors is important than the environment factor. Because the human is very important ,if no human then how to have the environment.Human have storng leadership then I think the leadership is very big.
So,I think the human factors is more important then the environment factor.
TANG SHING CHI (1B-32)
The Human factor is more important for the country to become a strong country. It is because the good Human can help the country use easily idea to help the country
to fight the country was not very strong ,but the country have a lot of thing to use ,like wood, weapons, food and the money etc . When the country fight to this country or cit.
If you winner in the fight. The winner will become a strong country very easily .
CHEN TSZ CHING (1B-03)
I think human is important than the environmental factors for the rise of empires. It is because if the empire have no human, their have not any economic, military etc.
For example, Greek empire was near the sea so they have a strong navy . If Greek do not have any human ,they will not have a strong navy.
LAM OI TING (1B-09)
I think is the human factors is more important than the environment factor for rise of the empires, it is because in human factor have leadership. Although geographical factor is a very important factor for the rise of the empires, but people can use mind to solve the problem of geographical. People can construct the buildings , can invention think to improve our life. So, I think human factors is more important than the environment factor.
CHIU HO YAN MALKA (1B-04)
Environmental factor are important but human are more important.However, I think human are more important for the rise of empire. For example, China become rich and strong because there are lots of people to make money.
CHAN HOI CHING (1B-02)
ReplyDeleteI think human factor is more important than environment factor .It is because if the people are storng ,the cloud win the wars easily.
LEUNG CHEUK LAM SUBRINA (1B-10)
Of cause, the human factors and the environment factors are both important because there are lots of things to do to be a strong empire.But,I think environment factors is more important than the human facetorsto be a strong empire.Human factors includs natural barries......
People need water and food. If a empire local somewhere which is always flooding.The flooding mades lots of people die and need lots of time to rerise.And will lose lots of food.
When the empire is need river or sea.People can get water easily.he place usually good for farming because it is near the sea.If there enough food then can support to fight for a long time.
So ,i think environment factors is more important than the human factors.
WONG WING HIN (1B-36)
I think human factor is more important than enviromental factors because if a strong empire didn't have a smart leadership to leader your empire it will be very troublesome.
For example, if you don't have a smart leader to lead your arms, your arms will don't know how to fight with other empire....... So i thing human factor is more important than enviromental factors.
I think human factor is more important than enviromental factor because if the leader do not kown way to fight other empire, they will be lose the war, and if the empire haven't leader, it will be can not control the money about economy.
ReplyDeleteI think enviromental factor is more important than the human factor because when we have good enviromental then we will have good economies and good geography. Economics have good system of network or surrounding enviroment. Adequate labor sourses for construction works and production . And the geography is about the natural barriers to protecet the civilization, convenient of travelling. And it also haveAdequate the natural resoures. They also have the fertile soil so they can grow crops easily. If they have the good travel they can trade some things to another countries or city. So I think that enviromental factor is more important than the human factor.
ReplyDeleteI think human factor is the rise of empires, it is because you did not have a leader you cannot battle with the other countries because no one lead the people than they will become, if you have internal conflict you will lose on the battle than you did not have place and money, but contrary the place and money will reduce and reduce, if you did not have a good leader it can’t use the good stratagem to battle with the other countries then it will lose the battle, it that is the bad leader it can’t get the hart of the citizenry, so I think the human factor is the rise of empires.
ReplyDeleteI think human of the factor is more important , because if we do not have many human in the empires , we have not farming, fishing and fighting with other empires.If we do not have leader we can also die in the empires.It is because the other empire will fight with the empires.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, human factors is more important than the environmental factos to the rise of civilization. For example, Roman Empire had a good leadership, Julius Caesar. He was probably the best Roman General in the history of Ancient Rome. When he was in the office, he carried out reforms, relieved debt, enlarged the senate and revised the calendar. With the best army, he fought the barbarians in the North. Finally, he could expand the territories of Roman.
ReplyDeleteThat's why, i think the Human factors are very important. If there was no Julius Caesar, the Roman Empire no longer existed.
I think human of the factor ,in Human is more important for the rise of empires and Deadline ,if have the bad leades it will Deadline ,and if have good leades it will rise.
ReplyDeleteI think, because the human is very important, if not human, no empire can rise
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ReplyDeleteDear Ricky,
I am happy to see that you are capabhle to use examples to illustrate the importance of leadership.
Dear Chun Hong,
ReplyDeleteI am afraid your sharing is too short and brief. One sentence is totally unacceptable. Try to write more by giving more explanation and illustrations. Looking forwards to seeing your sharing again.
Dear Tsz Yuen,
ReplyDeleteYou have your points and topic sentence, but there is no evidences provided to illustrate your points. Please write again and give more examples to illustrate.
Dear Yat Sum
ReplyDeleteYou have made your point clear, but you need to write more in order to expand your points, explain and illustrate with concrete examples.
Write it all over again.
I thank if you have a good leader your empire will up,if not it will deadline
ReplyDeleteDear Matthew,
ReplyDeleteHow can you write a sharing in ONE WORD! Write out your ideas in details and illustrate your points.
I think is Human of the factor.I t is because we want to have a good leader to manage the empire.The leader want to manage military 、economical、politics.If no leader to manage the empire.The empire will become extinct.
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ReplyDeleteI thin is the important factor is the human factor.
ReplyDeleteThe human factor can rise the Environmental factor.
So I think the human factor is the umportant factor.
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ReplyDeleteI think the environmental factor and the human factor are both important of the rise of empires, because if the humans do not have a good environment, then the empire will not be much stronger. Maybe some forest will use to make some paper by the human. But human factor is also good! The human will make buildings, or to be a solider. In this compare, that’s show us both factors are the important for the rise of empires.
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ReplyDeleteFirstly, I would like to clear of my view of manpower and environmental factor. For environmental factor, it’s like the base factor of all factors. Because of a good environmental factor, people there can have good result from framing and this encourage the economy increase and when the economy increase, and then they can make more weapons and lastly this can increase the military power. These can let an empire rise, and most of the people would think that these benefits are from the environmental power. However, if there is no manpower, what above are only dreams! Let me take an example for clear of these ideas. Moreover, I would like to pack up Persia as an example. Persia is a place that most around sea, although this, they started to develop fishery. Also, this encourage their economy increase and they started to develop navy, because of their long-drawn-out reach with the sea, their navy has lots of rich experience, these help them won in many wars. However, if these are with out manpower, they won’t win. Lastly, what I would like to say is that manpower is important as environmental factor, and they like two rings locked together, if missing any one of them, the empire will come to the fall.
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ReplyDeleteThe Human factor is more important for the country to become a strong country. It is because the good Human can help the country use easily idea to help the country
to fight the country was not very strong ,but the country have a lot of thing to use ,like wood, weapons, food and the money etc . When the country fight to this country or cit.
If you winner in the fight. The winner will become a strong country very easily .